I
am an American female college student. I have aspirations to a professional
career and reasonable prospects for a secure future. My status as an equal
citizen is legally protected and, as a person, I feel I am valued by my society.
I do not count myself as being disadvantaged just because I was born a woman. This
is not the case, however, for millions of women in countries and cultures that exploit
and abuse women, condone rape and violence against them, and deny them basic
civil rights. Nicholas Kristof and
Sheryl WuDunn tackle the oppression of women around the world in their seminal
book, Half the Sky. This title comes
from the Chinese proverb that women hold up “half the sky,” and so conveys the
book’s thesis: we should remember women are half of our population and that
empowering them releases tremendous untapped resources for economic and social
progress.
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Kristof and WuDunn |
While Nicholas
Kristof did not have the same family history as his wife, his previous
journalism experiences left him with an obligation to heighten awareness. Their
book, published in 2009, a national best seller, describes instances of sex
trafficking, gender based violence, maternal morbidity, honor killings and mass
rape—all bound by the central theme of gender inequality. Just as slavery and
totalitarianism were core human rights problems in the past, the oppression of
women today is a moral wrong and demands the world’s attention. Attention is
exactly what the authors got. Little did either writer know, they would do much
more than sell books—they would become social entrepreneurs. What I mean by
this is that Kristof and WuDunn became spokesmen for the oppression of women. Their
resume included personal experiences, empirical data, and an agenda for change.
They were a triple threat – on a mission to put these issues in the public’s
face – making awareness impossible to ignore.
Melinda Gates
states, “The stories that Kristof and WuDunn share are as powerful as they are
heartbreaking.” (Melinda Gates on Half the Sky) The authors describe the scope of the problem as follows: “More girls were
killed in the last 50 years, precisely because they were girls, than men killed
in all the wars in the 20th century. More girls are killed in this routine
gendercide in any one decade than people were slaughtered in all the genocides
of the 20th century.” (Half the Sky, Intro) This loaded statement isn’t a superficial
attempt to get the reader’s attention, it is the bare facts – and the facts are
enough to blow anyone’s mind. Speaking to individual circumstances, one of the
stories in Half the Sky is about a
Pakistani woman who refused to have an arranged marriage. When her brothers
found out about this, “they bickered over whether they should kill her or just
sell her to a brothel.” (Half the Sky, p.150) Just from these few quotes, we
can see Kristof and WuDunn’s brilliance of combining data and anecdotes. Although
the statistics of women’s oppression sells the message on it’s own, the authors
appeal to pathos through story-telling, bringing us into the world of a
suffering woman – after all, that is what inspired the journalists themselves
to begin writing.
Moreover is the
point that if we empower these women, not only will they be valued, they are
likely to go on and create businesses.
Hence the subtitle of the book, “Turning
Oppression Into Opportunity.” When a woman is given the chance to be educated,
and goes on to get a loan, research shows that that investment will produce
higher returns than the same investment with her male counterpart. With scarce
resources, females invest money more wisely than men. Further, in a world where billions are being
spent on security, experts say the best way to fight terrorism is to invest in
girls. (Sheryl
WuDunn on Colbert) This investment, the
journalists claim, begins with education. Education not only improves
intelligence, it teaches self-worth. Also, Kristof and WuDunn claim, “Microfinance
has done more to bolster the status of women, and to protect them from abuse,
than any laws could accomplish. Capitalism, it turns out, can achieve what
charity and good intentions sometimes cannot. (Half the Sky, p. 187) If we can’t
fiscally support these women, helping them fight for the opportunity to succeed
may be enough.
The
combination of Kristof and WuDunn’s individual strengths makes the message of
the book all the more powerful; it also models the creative collaboration that
they say will improve the lives of women. Nicholas Kristof is an Op-Ed writer
who focuses on societal injustices. One of Kristof’s intellectual influences is
Victor Zorza, a journalist for The
Guardian who is respected for his narrative-like writings on the Soviet
Union. (Victor
Zorza) Zorza has inspired Kristof with his anecdotal writing—which happens to
be the writing style used in Half the Sky.
Kristof at his best is a storyteller. His individual vignettes of oppressed
woman, and stories of triumph over adversity bring an empathetic tone to Half the Sky. He exposes the issues through individual
narratives. After doing research, Nicholas Kristof said, “It turns out that
empathy and moral judgments are an emotional process, not a rational one.
They're based on storytelling, and people want to be a part of something
positive, not something depressing and failed.” (Interview with Kristof and WuDunn on Book) Sheryl Wudunn writes about female entrepreneurs and was a
journalist for the New York Times.
Her contribution to the partnership was to bear the facts and figures, the statistics
and a sense of relatability, being a third generation Chinese American female. WuDunn’s
hefty economic background introduces hopeful data suggesting that we can turn
both the lives of women and the global economy around.
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Half the Sky |
However, asking
Americans to help these invisible women overseas has, undoubtedly, brought
controversy. While we live in a secular nation, much of the world relies
heavily on religion. When there is a divide in fundamental beliefs, people are
less inclined to join together. Kristof and WuDunn claim that if the two can
come together and fight against oppression, we would be “emulating an era when
liberal deists and conservative evangelicals joined forces to overthrow
slavery.” (Changing Lives, NY Times Article) According to the couple, helping oppressed women must be a
universal effort. It is not something that can be done by one person, one
group, or one nation. However, when there are so many different views on the
world, there will be different views on the process of change. Will we help the
women by building places of faith? Will we help by investing in job creation? A
rift in belief systems is a very possible problem and Kristof and WuDunn don’t
have a plan of action.
Another charge was
that Kristof and WuDunn “prize pragmatism over an analysis of power, simple
stories over complex narratives, and motivating an ‘every women’ reader over
pointing out hypocrisies, inconsistencies, and challenges of Western based
activism for global uplift.” (Equal Writes Book
Review) While using narratives appeals to the reader, it is fair to say
that it shows more of a simplistic example. Kristof and WuDunn should have given
just as much attention to the statistics for success just as they did for oppression. It can be criticized that
they relied too heavily on data regarding the negative aspects and relied too
heavily on anecdotes for the positive aspects. Another point is that foreign
activism can only go so far. This limitation seems to be over looked in Half the Sky. It is even argued that
foreign activism can be counterproductive. If someone’s home country isn’t
devoted to righting a moral wrong, the process will not get anywhere, and
governments will become angry at foreign nations for trying to impose change.
Still, Kristof and
WuDunn fight back to say that empowering and educating women is universally
beneficial. By helping women, we are helping the global economy. The
journalists will not be satisfied with Americans putting on a T-shirt reading
“Women’s Equality” – claiming to join the movement. They expect donation and
time, because with donation and time, a real difference is possible. Since, as
a college student, I don’t have two pennies to rub together, I have taken
advantage of my Facebook and Twitter page. These two people have really moved
me to want to help – however, I’m not exactly in the position to contribute
money. For the more established population, donate when you can, share Half the Sky with colleagues, and spread
the word. Two people can’t make a change, but the world can. Helping Kristof
and WuDunn get the word out is the first step to helping these women.
John Lennon’s song
“Woman,” though written as a romantic testimony to one woman, captures something
of the emotional heart of Half the Sky:
Woman, I can hardly
express
My mixed emotions and my thoughtlessness
After all, I'm forever in your debt
And woman, I will try to express my inner feelings and thankfulness
For showing me the meaning of success
My mixed emotions and my thoughtlessness
After all, I'm forever in your debt
And woman, I will try to express my inner feelings and thankfulness
For showing me the meaning of success
We should feel not only upset for how women fare around the
world, but grateful for what they can contribute to the well being of the world,
if only we globally treat them as
fully equal members of the human race in every country. Our nation is aware of
women’s potential. Our nation is aware of women’s rights. Our nation is aware
of female injustice in developing countries. And, our nation needs to be nudged
to do more – we can socially, politically, intellectually, and economically
afford it. Nicholas Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn have devoted much of their time
to righting this wrong. They have been able to bring momentous awareness to an
urgent issue. Now it is up to us to (1) donate when possible, (2) advocate for
more government aid, and (3) take advantage of social media outlets as a way to
promote gender equality. Nicholas Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn have proven to be extraordinary
individuals. In a society where it is so easy to sit back, they did more – now
it’s our turn.
References Other Than Internet
Kristof, Nicholas, and Sheryl WuDunn. Half the Sky: Turning Oppression Into Opportunity for Women Worldwide. Knopf Doubleday Publishing Group, 2009. Print.
I really enjoyed your piece because I think it is an extremely important topic that needs to be discussed more and deserves much more media attention then it receives. I read this book last year and I was just as moved, but was unaware of the history of the authors so I enjoyed being able to grasp an understanding of their positions that led them to deal with such important and hidden issues in our global society today. We do not realize that all it takes, literally, is 5 dollars to change an entire family's life. The stories are incredibly moving, and there style of writing, though they did receive a lot of criticism after publication, is essential and highly successful in this text. You picked two incredible people and highlighted their lives in good balance with their successful work that has done more than influence those around them; they have truly changed the world. Their critics cannot really criticize them that deeply, because of their first hand experiences and you did a wonderful job of bringing out these points, through the book and what seems to be their natural desire to change the world, one dollar at a time, and even deeper, one person at a time. I enjoyed your writing style here and think you really achieved highlighting their wonderful work and what should be done by others as a result, as our duty to follow in their footsteps.
ReplyDeleteWell said, Mellissa. I also enjoyed Catherine's piece a lot for the same reasons. Her passion comes through, and that's important, as she cites Kristof himself saying that emotional appeals are being recognized as a crucial part of effective rhetoric.
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